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Box
Contributed by
harlot20
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Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 10:36:04 PM in AEST
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I have never felt so detached from the world than i am right now...
I blame all this getting up in time to see sunlight, it's disorientating.
Also i don't know who i am anymore
....lost identity
Feel so lost, like i've lost something inside
And i'm in a fog, and no one can reach me
And i can't see anything.
I feel like i'm rotting here in this place.
I'm sitting here in a dank, cold, dark room
And everything is damp.
I've really gotta get out of here
...somehow.
I really hope it's not in a box.
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harlot20
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2005-07-07 22:36:04]
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Re: Box
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by emystar on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 12:12:25 AM AEST
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Well I pray it's not in a box.
U r a good writer maybe u could write your way out.
We all get this way at times.
take it easy on yourself and keep writing. Writing is a great healer.
huggs, prayer,
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Re: Box
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 10:34:37 AM AEST
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Very emotive piece...Hopefully soon things will take a turn for the better...If you ever want someone to talk to, feel free to pm me. Take Care.
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Re: Box
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 01:25:09 AM AEST
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"Alice in Chains"
comes to mind!!
I Implore you to discover their music...if you haven't already!
(right up your alley)
-and mine..lol-
Great write!
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