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She Awakes
Contributed by
bgj
on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 09:36:53 PM in AEST
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Her body stirs
Slowly uncurling
Long legs stretching
First one, the other
Slender back arching
Twisting, left, right
Lithe arms rising
Reaching, spreading
Lovely face lifting
Tilting back
Sleep filled eyes
Closed, partly
Sensuous lips
Parting, slightly
Gentle yawn
Becomes impish smile
Looks at me
Good morning love.
Bobby G. Jarrard
Copyright 2005 by Bobby G. Jarrard
Copyright ©
bgj
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2005-07-07 21:36:53]
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Re: She Awakes
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by Unbreakable on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 05:41:14 PM AEST
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Good write..It's very descriptive and you have good choice in wording..keep it up!
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Re: She Awakes
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by ladymaki on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 12:22:54 PM AEST
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| That's so beautiful..it reminds me of my boyfriend and I..I love to watch him sleep..I hope I'm interpreting this right :S Lol. Awesome job :) |
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Re: She Awakes
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by Alison on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 12:07:56 AM AEST
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| I think it is really "cute" and it made me smile and wish I had someone that thought all that about me...thank you... |
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