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Line
Contributed by
PoisonousPyscho
on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 07:58:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Line
There is a thin line
Between right and wrong
Good and bad
It’s thinner then you think
If you cross into the wrong side
You’re bound to get caught
They’ll call and question you
They’ll ask what you thought
You were doing
If you tell them the truth
It wont be as bad
As if you tell them a lie
Because they’ll know that you’re lying
They’ll make it much worse
You’ll be stranded for life
With a permanent curse
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PoisonousPyscho
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2005-07-07 19:58:19]
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Re: Line
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by Doriens_Picture on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 08:01:39 PM AEST
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sounds like it was a bit more than naughty
naughty is using a bad line on a girl and getting slapped
kinda have to pay the price there too
but good write
though sometime being naughty is worth getting caught over
but soudns like not this time hmm
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Re: Line
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by em1842 on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 04:41:09 AM AEST
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| i liked the 'skating on thin ice' image, maybe could have gone into the coldness? I thought this was good :) |
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Re: Line
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by Drapes on
Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 09:30:32 PM AEST
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Interesting... but nice write!
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