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Dear London
Contributed by
jyssvw22
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Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 06:32:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Dear London
We abroad feel your pain
Feel the sorrow
And are determined not to stay the same
This idea of a world so plain
Closely tied
By an ocean
Or mountain range
By a flag that sits
Half-staffed
By the tilt in the earth
By the deaths in the dirt
Underground soot
In the throat
Chokes and hurts
So now you know
What we have felt
Felt the blast
From the heat that melts
The metal and glass
And everything else
The blood spilled
It was not a birth
But terror on earth
Earth being
The operative word
We throw a rose
And light the waxed flame
The glow is black
And is determined not to stay the same
_______________
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Copyright ©
jyssvw22
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2005-07-07 18:32:04]
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Re: Dear London
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 06:56:21 PM AEST
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EXCELLENT.
Scorp. |
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Re: Dear London
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 07:18:54 PM AEST
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A powerful message, and said very well. I wholeheartedly second the words of this poem.
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Re: Dear London
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by deathdrop on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 07:21:06 PM AEST
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yeah, i come from england... thankfully not London though...
i apreciate your respect for my country at a time like this... thanks... |
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Re: Dear London
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 11:10:30 PM AEST
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Yes, they came quickly to our aid, now we will quickly do the same. It is time to end the sacrilege and terror held over the world by a few evil men. Our countries and others will, without a doubt, stop this plaque.
Rita |
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Re: Dear London
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 06:09:50 PM AEST
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good job
I dont have much to say here
because this things bother me |
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