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Kissing
Contributed by
fay
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Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 06:18:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My faltering lips tend to yours
A soft caress that swallows me whole.
So big and deep it lays me bare
Gently teasing and leaving me blind
Suspending us in time.
Copyright ©
fay
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2005-07-07 18:18:16]
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Re: Kissing
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by thepizzaguy on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 08:44:58 PM AEST
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Hey this was a good poem. I really like how you kept it short, sweet, and to the point. So often I find poems with multiple stanzas that have one simple message. I think the fact that you conveyed your message in one stanza makes this poem unique. Great write.
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Re: Kissing
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by poemprophet on
Friday, 9th March 2007 @ 08:51:16 PM AEST
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| really sweet poem. it really says how this kiss makes you feel loved and secure. |
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