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Your Last Smile
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 05:19:36 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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Your last smile was given to me,
Just for a moment you broke free,
Free from all your pain,
You looked so happy once again.
I wish your smile was forever,
I can’t believe I’ll see you never,
You didn’t deserve to suffer,
Now you’re placed under Angels cover.
Your smile I’ll always remember,
From January through til December,
I can still see your face,
You are a memory time can’t erase.
What I’d give just to hold your hand,
Walk next to you in Gods land,
Hold you close tell you it’s alright,
Reassuring you never will you have to fight.
Your last smile is forever in my heart,
And although death has tore us apart,
Never will you leave my thoughts,
Eternally in my heart you’ve been caught.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2005-07-07 17:19:36]
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Re: Your Last Smile
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 05:31:05 PM AEST
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Your writing has always been excellent. And this was no exception.
Miss all your works Kirssie.
Jane xx |
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Re: Your Last Smile
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 06:06:08 PM AEST
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Aww this is beautiful...Made me think of my own Nan and how much she meant to me. Great write Pix...
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Re: Your Last Smile
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by jyssvw22 on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 06:39:39 PM AEST
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this is a realy nice and just a great poem...
thanks for sharing
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Re: Your Last Smile
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 06:42:45 PM AEST
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I am sorry for your loss. This is a beautiful poem.
Take care.
Scott |
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Re: Your Last Smile
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 06:43:21 PM AEST
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Awww pixie..I know how much you must miss her... Lovely tribute to your Nan..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Your Last Smile
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 09:38:40 PM AEST
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beautiful poem my dear friend I am sorry for
your loss, but she isn't feeling any more pain.
I thought this poem was very touching and it
was good to stumble across one of your
writes... it is good to know you are safe after
today's bombings in London. Hope to talk to
you soon.
Hugs,
Joel |
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Re: Your Last Smile
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 10:12:54 AM AEST
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Beautiful and heart warming pix, one may
leave but they never realy go away, lovely
as always . . . ((((((((pixie))))))))))
Ben |
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Re: Your Last Smile
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 11:09:43 PM AEST
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| =] wonder poem, a wonderful read. youve outdone yourself as you do with every piece filled with emotion, a rarity for some writers, but never for you. |
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