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Lost
Contributed by
heartbroken4ever
on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 02:05:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Somethimes in your live you feel like a queen
and then other times you lose everything
Well right now to me everything is lost
and for me it was a very high cost
My world is slipping right from under me
What did I miss what didn't I see
My emotions are out of control
and I fell like I've just losted my soul
I don't know how to make things right
I'm away in the dark trapped from all light
It seems I'm so far from my own heart
my world just torn apart
I need to find my way
how I can't wait for that day
I trapped inside this lonely girl
with no way to get out into the world
I just want to be set free from my pain
and fall down from the sky just like the rain
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2005-07-07 14:05:18]
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Re: Lost
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by ForeverAlone on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 02:09:39 PM AEST
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hmph..your so far from being alone my love, because i am here, tho you might be lonely there, its only for a short time, good write babe
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Re: Lost
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 02:37:03 PM AEST
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very honest and lonely... i hope that all gets better for you. until then, keep up the fine writing. I especially like the last two lines... very strong imagery
dw |
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