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i needed help but not from you
Contributed by
northernrick
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Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 01:23:16 PM in AEST
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I need help
but not from you
you have no idea what to do...
You have tried to be there for me
for years and years
but now its time for you to let go, and give up those tears
I don’t wanna see you anymore
I never wanna to come in your door,
I want to brake away
I only have one more thing to say
This is my last day.....
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northernrick
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2005-07-07 13:23:16]
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Re: i needed help but not from you
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by Flyinglow on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 03:26:06 PM AEST
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| Nice write, i liked the ending, it was strong |
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Re: i needed help but not from you
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 06:30:38 PM AEST
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Strong emotion conveyed well in such a short write...Good job. I hope things get better for you soon. If you ever want a friendly ear, feel free to pm me...Take Care.
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