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Couch critters
Contributed by
wordsy
on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 07:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Down in the cracks
where the old crumbs go
Down in the shadows
where the lights don't show
In between the cushions
and under them too
You wouldn't believe
what's hidden from view
A strange little world
all to it's own
unlike any other
that's ever been known
A world of wonder
Where lintpickers play
And crumb crunchers gather
and grumble all day
A place where fuzzies
and frizzies hang out
With dust bunnies
scurring and hiding about
And way down under
far, far below
Down where the fuzzies
and frizzies won't go
Down in the bottom
of the old gray couch
The crack monster lives
and boy what a grouch
He growls and he grumbles
He moans and he groans
He munches and crunches
and gnaws at old combs
He spits and he sputters
And rumbles all day
And frightens the fuzzies
and frizzies away
So if you ever go digging
down deep in the couch
You'd better watch out
For the crack monster grouch
Copyright ©
wordsy
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2003-01-09 07:00:00]
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Re: Couch critters
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 07:58:26 AM AEST
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| This is really cute :) |
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Re: Couch critters
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 08:50:11 AM AEST
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| very good i will read this one to my grandson i really enjoyed it |
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Re: Couch critters
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 08:53:34 AM AEST
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Dearest Wordsy @=>>=
Rofl!! This is Great!! Brought a huge smile to my face! Sooo cute I'm betting you both had a wonderful chuckle hehe
Hugs always Nessa
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Re: Couch critters
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by Fwog on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 09:24:56 AM AEST
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I love it, love it ,love it.
This is a wonderful write, and oh what a journey.
This is like Hobbitt country.
Thank you for this I just bet your little one loved it. |
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Re: Couch critters
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by OreO on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 10:03:25 AM AEST
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Awww this is so cute hehe...and it's soooo true those lil monster grouches underneath tha old gray couches can be quite frightening lmao....thanks for sharing this one wordsy ...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: Couch critters
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by roisin on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 10:10:27 PM AEST
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| hope it's okay with you that I bring this poem along with me to school next week...the children will get such a giggle from it...and it's a good one to do finger plays with, I'm thinking!!! it will be great fun!!!...rosie |
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