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To dad
Contributed by
northernrick
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Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 12:58:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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I know im not the son of your dreams,
I know you have nothing to be proud of
I know I don’t give it all,
You make me feel like sh*t,
see how you feel, when im gone and above
You tell me you will take me away,
Away from my life
Away from what I love
I will keep fighting till I stay
you think you have control me
but when im gone you will see....
Yes I let you down
But I let myself down more
that doesn’t mean im going to come to your door
I lost you years ago and now you expect to get me back
just because I screwed up, you expect me to pack.....
This life I have can be changed but not with you
Leave me alone....
Its not like your love has ever shown....
Copyright ©
northernrick
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2005-07-07 12:58:45]
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Re: To dad
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 02:08:05 PM AEST
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very honest and heartfelt! all the stuff a good poem is about.. thanks for sharing it
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Re: To dad
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 03:18:56 PM AEST
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You really laid it on the line...Strong emotions present in this piece. Well done.
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