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You
Contributed by
fears
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Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 11:49:06 AM in AEST
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You are the bounce in my step and the core of my laughter.
You are the drumming of my heart and the snapping of my fingers.
Your eyes trace my every movement and I know that I am safe,
Your mouth says every word that I’m thinking and I know that you understand.
You are the flicker in my flame and the center of my thoughts.
You are the tone in my voce and the key to my soul.
The things that you tell me I will never forget
And the words that you whisper I are forever engraved into my memory
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2005-07-07 11:49:06]
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Re: You
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 12:15:33 PM AEST
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Sounds like love kiddo! Good to see in spite of all the changes in your life recently, you still have something positive going on...There were a couple minor typos in this, just give it a once over next time. Nice piece!
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Re: You
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by Dri on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 12:36:56 PM AEST
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| yeah, minor mistakes, other than that this is very short and sweet. |
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Re: You
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by wizard on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 12:45:47 PM AEST
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sounds like you have what many never will.
congratulations
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Re: You
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by Dorkfish on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 12:55:20 PM AEST
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| Very sweet. You are very lucky to have that someone that makes you feel so complete. Most don't have it and most settle and never will. Congratulations and I wish you lots of luck. Great write, so sweet. |
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Re: You
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by sick_n_twisted on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 12:40:42 PM AEST
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| love it! love how the flow and everything it...good job!...i feel the same way about sumone |
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