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End of the world
Contributed by
Taylor
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Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 09:29:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Well Im all alone
In a world that wont let me Die.
I just want a place to hide.
so I can keep my pain inside
not shure if i will ever survive
but someday I will learn to breath right
every day I seem to be living a lie
well now it's the end of the world
I may breath right again
smile my love, my only comfort.
Copyright ©
Taylor
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2005-07-07 09:29:16]
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Re: End of the world
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 12:14:30 PM AEST
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Dear Taylor,
Your beautiful, well written poem remains a mystery, however, it is very sad indeed!
Very smooth, and tense, you are very talented
and please let me welcome you aboard!
Go out and comment, comment, comment.
You'll be become well known,
You're going to really enjoy this poetry site, Taylor........the people here are really real!
Good luck to you
Warm love
Lovingcritters
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Re: End of the world
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 10:56:47 AM AEST
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wonderful, beautiful. short and sweet, and i like it...
great write
- Bethani - |
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