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The Prison Tree
Contributed by
gwenevere
on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 02:03:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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She see's the monster waiting there
And gives him such a curious stare
Come on now you can't scare me
I'm a lady, can't you see
You can't bite off my sweet head
There are nicer things instead
I have some chocolate here to eat
And some cookies, what a treat
The monster looks in great surprise
He can't believe his bright green eyes
A lady who will show no fear
What a treasure he has here
Yes, I will share your tasty goods
So long since I found my tastebuds
You are a lady through and through
Green eyed monster does love you
I love you my monster dear
With flash and bang, a man appears
No more monster there to see
For the lady set him free
I will be your love for life
will you come and be my wife
No more jealousy for me
I can leave this prison tree
The morale of this tale you see
Leave behind the prison tree
If you feel envy has won
Green eyed monster you'll become
Copyright ©
gwenevere
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2005-07-07 02:03:46]
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Re: The Prison Tree
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by bernard on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 03:43:47 AM AEST
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| You amaze me evyr day a little more Gwenevere. You should see about getting your work published. Top marks for one of my favourite subjects Dragons. |
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Re: The Prison Tree
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by wizard on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 04:27:57 PM AEST
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this one seemed a bit more juvenile than the others...not that that's a bad thing. i still enjoyed it though.
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Re: The Prison Tree
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 06:18:37 PM AEST
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Woah... crazy. This is cool and so is the morale. It is true too. Well, you won't become a green-eyed monster, of course, but you will change. Nice write...
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Re: The Prison Tree
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by mom11159 on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 08:27:53 AM AEST
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I AM STANDING AND APPLAUDING YOUR you kept me so very interested and waiting in antisipation for each new part what a great write like a said before like watching a great movie with 5 parts and waiting in antisipation for the next on. Bravo this is incredible with such a great ending and a great moral to the story. I think I have dated a couple of those green monsters my self lol
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