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just thoughts swiming in my head
Contributed by
candi
on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 01:19:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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overrated love
underrated trust
things start out so innocent
but continue out of lust
you over look certain things
you otherwise would see
but nothing seems to matter when they are alone with me
and when they leave you are so lonely
wishing they were there to hold me
wanting to give up and move on
but never doing so
im too far gone
i mean well in the things i do and say
but breaking the habit is not an easy play
half of me wants to give
the other half get
but mostly all i want is to say ***** it and forget
never knowing up or down
just cant ever remove the frown
wanting something to be real
needing to express how i feel
falling in the same black hole
letting anger take control
losing out on what i won
starting over when i just begun
confuseing one thing for another
wanting to run and take cover
opening up to be hurt
feeling like the queen of dirt
needing something to be real
one day ill learn how to deal
never my heart will they steal
Copyright ©
candi
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2005-07-07 01:19:05]
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Re: just thoughts swiming in my head
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by Sahara on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 04:00:04 AM AEST
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Very amazing for simple thoughts swimming about, sums up the way so many feel.
Great write
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Re: just thoughts swiming in my head
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 06:22:20 PM AEST
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This is a wonderful write, but I am not sure if it is fantasy. Many think like this and it isn't exactly fantasy... it's true feelings. Many feel like this, and great job of describing that...
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Re: just thoughts swiming in my head
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by Candi on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 01:09:13 AM AEST
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the fantasy part was an accident,
its actually supposed to be under the general poetry topic. lol. sorry for the mix up. |
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Re: just thoughts swiming in my head
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by candysears on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 08:08:50 PM AEST
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Great write!
God Bless! |
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