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White Moth
Contributed by
Elayner27
on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 01:10:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I am that white moth at the window.
I am so frail and fragile.
You try to comfort and hold me.
You didn't know your touch is poison.
The soft finger tips brush my wings.
They burn and whither I can not move.
All you wanted was to get close to me.
All you did was kill me painfully.
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Elayner27
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2005-07-07 01:10:40] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: White Moth
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 01:19:34 AM AEST (User
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Very good unique write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: White Moth
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 01:20:01 AM AEST (User
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Very good unique write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: White Moth
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 01:52:26 AM AEST (User
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very nice write
I like it.
Its hard to comment right now
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Re: White Moth
(User Rating: 1 ) by Shorty_88 on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 03:31:56 AM AEST (User
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Hi there
I think your poem is great and it was a very creative write. Keep up the great work.
Warmest Regards, Tara |
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Re: White Moth
(User Rating: 1 ) by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 03:54:45 AM AEST (User
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A short yet dramatic piece. It's a wonderful write with lots of feelings behind it.
Now thats a special poem. Keep it up.
Jane xxx |
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Re: White Moth
(User Rating: 1 ) by Spazzo on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 10:26:53 PM AEST (User
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Wow. This is awesome and emotional, I can relate to it. Great poem.
Take care.
Scott |
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