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My Butterfly
Contributed by
Elayner27
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Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 01:06:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Like the wing of a butterfly,
One day you're here at my side,
The next your gone.
You blew away into the field,
Grass burning as you flew,
Harmful whispers from your wings.
They're telling me to go back,
To the place I began, so alone,
Without you with me.
I can't leave you,
My beautiful butterfly,
I cry as you fly far away.
The burning has reached my skin,
Eating away at my clothes,
I can see you...laughing.
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Elayner27
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2005-07-07 01:06:51]
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Re: My Butterfly
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 01:58:54 AM AEST
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I loved your expression here
and the second stanza was
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Re: My Butterfly
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 10:41:27 PM AEST
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This is so deep, I am sorry for your pain. I hope you feel better.
Take care.
Scott |
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