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he loves her not
Contributed by
all_the_dead_roses
on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 12:08:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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she walks in silence
with lonely fear
as her only love
bestowed a tear
a rose in her hand
and a crack in her heart
she missed him already
standing 2 feet apart
one last hug
the first goodbye
a lonely soul
with an intent cry
he leaves her broken
he leaves her astray
no more words
could bring the sunshin to a ray
a mind of shatering thoughts
with broken dreams
He loves her NOT
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Re: he loves her not
(User Rating: 1 )
by AfterLivingDeath on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 01:01:22 AM AEST
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i really liked this one. and i can relate to it a lot. this has happened so many times. and i'm sure i'm not the only person here that understands exactly were ur coming from.
i love the way u wrote this. the rhyming is perfect and the way u wrote it u could see it preforming in your minds eye.
keep up the good work, u have a great talent.
~ALD~ |
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Re: he loves her not
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by DarkFairyLove on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 03:43:40 PM AEST
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| This poem was beautiful and I feel the pain you are relaying from it. I have known love and loss in my life and i know it isnt easy. Be true to yourself and the pain will go away, but the longer you hold it in the longer you will find it takes to find a love to fill its place....Thank you for gracing us with this beautiful read...Kayla |
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Re: he loves her not
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by DarkFairyLove on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 03:43:56 PM AEST
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| This poem was beautiful and I feel the pain you are relaying from it. I have known love and loss in my life and i know it isnt easy. Be true to yourself and the pain will go away, but the longer you hold it in the longer you will find it takes to find a love to fill its place....Thank you for gracing us with this beautiful read...Kayla |
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