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Lazy River
Contributed by
CarolinaBlue
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Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 11:52:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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Sun basking down
warmth on my face
a sigh of relief...ahhh
as I melt in this place
Blue skies above
birds flying by
huge cotton clouds
hypnotizing the eye
slowly drifting,
drifting, down the lazy river.
Feet hanging over
dipping them in
cool and refreshing
daydreams begin
Swirling around
all washed away
absent from mind
all events of the day
slowly drifting,
drifting, down the lazy river
Floating weightless,
no sense of time
just me and my tube
enjoying downtime
breeze comes along
soothing the skin
trees gently swaying
sleepy I grin
slowly drifting,
drifting, down the lazy river
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Re: Lazy River
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 08:22:13 AM AEST
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what a write!
had the feel of a..hypnotic lullabye..lol
and I love the metaphor of a "Lazy River"
spledid and soothing indeed!
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Re: Lazy River
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by wizard on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 09:28:45 AM AEST
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certainly a great write...reminds of my last summer vacation...drifting along, at ease and worry free.
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Re: Lazy River
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 12:25:02 PM AEST
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Nice job with this! I could picture everything as I was reading...The last stanza was my fave.
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Re: Lazy River
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 03:45:28 PM AEST
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Great imagery , Blue... Left me with such a feeling of tranquillity..
You have very wise parents..
Hugs
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