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mY tEdDy BeaR
Contributed by
lostrelic
on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 10:59:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
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feeling for distance as walk down this wall
each stone each crack i know them all
wandering around in this maze of my mind
searching away hoping for something new to find
any new defect in this prision of pain
would ease my mind from going insaine
me and my teddy singing a song
dont ask me why i brought him along
these bricks are old ive had them awhile
me and my teddy now 31 years on trial
should i have left him alone while i wonder this path
save him from sin and this never ending wrath
i figured it out i know what has to be done
ill throw him over the wall that will be fun
atleast he will be free away from this hell
ill sit quiet alone in my cell
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2005-07-06 22:59:40]
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Re: mY tEdDy BeaR
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 12:14:13 AM AEST
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No take him with you,
I Love your poetry, you really have something here, in all those cracks and stone's, dont wait for someone else to find the precious gold. I see it from here, and its priceless, but only you can value its worth!
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Re: mY tEdDy BeaR
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 08:29:56 AM AEST
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very superlative and kinda sad..
I liked it a lot though..
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