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Trail Of Sin
Contributed by
HOPE4ME2
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Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 10:35:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I walked the path of sorrow
Morning, noon and night.
So lost in self pity.
Slowly drowning in my plight.
My road becoming narrow,
Drifting further into sin.
Shining on the outside, dying deep within.
When on this road I stumbled
Falling to my knees,
I realized my "trail of sin"
Had me at my end.
With a heart so very humbled,
I cried unto the Lord,
Reaching up in faith,
He kindly entered in.
By grace He touched my life.
Pressing me close to His heart.
Engulfing me within His holy light,
Loving me from the start.
This "trail of sin" has ended.
His steps I follow close,
With each step keeping Him in sight.
His new trail, is mine to walk
Victory around each bend,
The day I knelt in prayer,
And kindly asked Him in.
I walked the path of sorrow,
Until I asked Him in . . .
Linda Mazade
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HOPE4ME2
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Re: Trail Of Sin
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 11:37:54 PM AEST
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I like the closing lines, the way they sum up the story in so few words. May He continue to bless you.
Andrew |
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Re: Trail Of Sin
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 09:28:42 AM AEST
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| great write, very spiritual..i also look forward to reading more of your work. -Steph |
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Re: Trail Of Sin
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Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 04:51:45 PM AEST
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| this poem is so insipiring and well written! i like how it flowed nicely and how in the end you repeated yourself, it adds a real nice touch to the ending. great job. |
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Re: Trail Of Sin
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 06:22:52 PM AEST
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This poem really touches my heart. It is so filled with reality. Many poems have touched my heart. You might have read the one called "Footprints"? by springbrook publication, inc.
That one gets me each time I read it.. happy tears..
Yours just did that to me.. happy, happy, hot loving tears.. oh.. your poem will hit home around the world.
Thank you for posting it..
Yours truly,
Raquel Leah (Poetress) |
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