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Missing Somebody
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
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Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 08:20:01 PM in AEST
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Do you ever feel you’re missing someone?
A person you have not met
A face you have not seen
Yet a face you can’t forget
I’m missing somebody today
My heart is stricken with grief
I am in such torment now
Bereaved kept from any relief
Begging for an embrace
Quietly I mourn
Over the touch I haven’t felt
Of unmet love forlorn
Sadness for the one I don’t know
Longing for a person I need
Loneliness over a stranger
My distant hope, my only creed
Do you ever feel you’re missing someone?
The one you can’t forget
The face you have not seen
The person you have not met
I’m missing somebody today
Although I don’t know who you are
Or whether you’re near me or afar
I still miss you
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pUnKa_RaCh
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Re: Missing Somebody
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by xxbreathlessx on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 08:32:24 PM AEST
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| i think you really hit the nail in the head with this one. i think many people feel this way, i know at times i do and i think its great writing. i loved it, keep on writing. |
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Re: Missing Somebody
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by Man_On_High on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 10:15:24 PM AEST
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Wow Rach!
What an emotional write..
your longing is very evident!
I love the lines:
"Do you ever feel you’re missing someone?
A person you have not met
A face you have not seen
Yet a face you can’t forget"
I'm sure they miss you too.
Great write
B
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Re: Missing Somebody
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 10:50:28 PM AEST
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i'm sorry to report that i've experienced these feelings many times...keep looking...
great poem,
wizard |
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Re: Missing Somebody
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by CarolinaBlue on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 01:05:39 AM AEST
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| a very good write with wonderful expression within. sad, but true. I have been in this place many times myself. don't worry there's someone out there for you. :-) ~Blue~ |
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Re: Missing Somebody
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by AfterLivingDeath on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 01:35:34 AM AEST
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ths is a very good poem. i've felt that way before but never knew exactly how to say it. this is exactly wat it felt like for me.
this is a very good poem. all the words go with the flow of the whole poem. u made it sound like everything came to u exactly how u wrote it. it might have, but it sounds like it too.
i really enjoyed the read. keep up the great work u have a real talent for this kind of thing
~ALD~ |
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Re: Missing Somebody
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 03:39:58 AM AEST
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Great job you get a 5 here for sure
I've had this feeling and still do
I cant pick a part I like best
because I love the whole thing
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Re: Missing Somebody
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by Spike on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 03:57:20 AM AEST
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Absolutely, and right now, so your poem went straight to my heart.
Spike |
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Re: Missing Somebody
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 04:05:46 AM AEST
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Ranch, this was just perfection. A sad poem filled with so much emotion it it. I loved it.
Keep them comming ok.
Jane xxx |
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Re: Missing Somebody
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 02:45:36 PM AEST
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if i had a wish right now i would wish i could
meet u, set up a synthersizer, and recording
gear, a mic in front of my mouth and turn this
masterpeice in 2 a hit song, brought me 2
tears absolutely astounding . . .
Ben |
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Re: Missing Somebody
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 01:12:14 PM AEST
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wow
i can realli relate to this one
good job
i loved it
-->Rae
ps i especially like the stanza
Do you ever feel you’re missing someone?
The one you can’t forget
The face you have not seen
The person you have not met
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Re: Missing Somebody
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by Gypsy on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 04:55:48 PM AEST
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| awesome, i totally connected with that! |
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