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The world

Contributed by lostinmyself on Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 06:46:43 PM in AEST
Topic: poets



He took poetry from the world,
Weaving nature with his fingertips,
And making the pages beautiful.

And the words were his dreams,
And the paper was the script,
And the world was his stage.
And he was the lead, and --


He would breathe upon the stars,
To hide their shine,
When the night needed the dark.

And he'd dance in tune,
To the sounds of his thoughts,
As they made the darkness shine.

Until the sun would light,
Up the moments,
In which his pen really was alive.

As he took life from the world,
From his fingers to words.
And made the pages beautiful again.

For the words were his dreams,
And the paper was the script,
And the world was his stage.
And he was the lead, and --

No one saw him there...




Copyright © lostinmyself ... [ 2005-07-06 18:46:43]
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Re: The world (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 06:51:53 PM AEST
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omg this is incredible anything I would say would never do this justice bravo bravo
Michelle tips her head to your poetic verse so very lovely
Michelle


Re: The world (User Rating: 1 )
by demonika_911 on Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 06:58:07 PM AEST
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Well done...I got goosebumps reading this poem, very well written, keep it up!

Tel


Re: The world (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 07:21:14 PM AEST
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This is brilliant, Philly. The emotions come through so well. Beautiful work.

Rita


Re: The world (User Rating: 1 )
by jyssvw22 on Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 07:33:40 PM AEST
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this was a great write

i truely enjoyed every word

nice


Re: The world (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 07:55:26 PM AEST
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OMG!! What an awesome write..... I loved it!!!!!
WOW!!
YOu have created a masterpiece here!!!
Jenni


Re: The world (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 08:39:57 PM AEST
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-Amazing write-

Very well written. Incredible thoughts indeed.

I enjoyed reading this
*claps*


Re: The world (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 11:27:21 PM AEST
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Well, this is pure beauty, Phil. It's wonderfully sensitive and poetic, with a hint of bittersweet about it. I love the way you've worded this - I'll surely be reading it again.

Slàinte!

Andrew


Re: The world (User Rating: 1 )
by CarolinaBlue on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 01:31:56 AM AEST
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What an inspirational write full of so many different emotions. Absolutely stunning. Bravo!

~Blue~


Re: The world (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 04:13:11 AM AEST
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Oh God!!! That has to be the best poem i have read in weeks. My favorite author is writing again. Bless.

I loved this i really do, i am sorry though that you had to go through this. An amazing girl once told me to keep my head up even if im in my darkest days. I followed it and it kept me going.

Ok enough of my rablings, you really are an amazing poet Philly. Keep posting ok.

Hugs,
Jane xxx


Re: The world (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 09:33:45 AM AEST
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Dearest Phil, your pen has yet again formed an artistic pallette on my screen! These words are so well formed that they flow like a gentle stream. They make sense and are filled with grand imagery that makes the mind captivated by it's tone. What a wonderful poem! Your talent never ceases to amaze me! (((phil)))
Angel always...joni


Re: The world (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 02:17:08 PM AEST
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This is velvet upon the heart, beautiful in so many ways phill, how ever u look at it it's a gem, a treasure 2 behold, dreamy and so
captivating, so enchanting, lovely as ever . . .

((((phill)))) Ben


Re: The world (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 09:38:28 PM AEST
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Oh, wow, Philomena.
I had no idea you'd come up with THIS out of that little snippet you sent me the other day. Brilliant! Brav-o!

Love and peace,

Chelsea


Re: The world (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 07:40:29 PM AEST
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I don't know how well I understood this, but it made me sit up and take notice. It has been a joy to watch you blossom.
Stitch


Re: The world (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 12:28:33 PM AEST
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It appears to me to be a masterful write about a poet being a poet. The scope and format are ingenius with a wonderful flow, which is poetry. :)

This really is incredable, and very creative

This is truely a talented write, Phil

Will


Re: The world (User Rating: 1 )
by hooray_its_jen on Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 10:53:41 AM AEST
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This would be yet another poem of yours that I don't feel worthy of commenting on.

You know what I think, and I feel that it's not necessary for me to say it.



~Jenna


Re: The world (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 04:04:03 PM AEST
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A beautiful poem. Rich, delicate and full of life, yet what a sad ending.......
It speaks volumes.


Re: The world (User Rating: 1 )
by WAE on Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 04:46:17 PM AEST
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A nice one but I'd like to know what inspired you to write this piece.
Well done,
Alex




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