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Self-destruct.
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 05:01:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I feel so pathetic
As I blink the tears away…
You want it, but I don’t deserve it…
Because I broke down again…
… And I am so sorry!
FOR EVERY THING I’VE DONE WRONG!
… But you’re so angry,
That I deserve to be a no one!
My tummy hurts from eating.
But I deserve it too.
I’m too fat to be lovely.
I deserve to be feeling blue.
I’m so far deep I’ve lost my way,
And I don’t know quite what to do.
My thoughts keep making me self-destruct.
My world keeps making me confused.
Yesterday… I said good bye to my life,
And it COMPLETELY shattered me down!
Yesterday, they cried as I was pulled away…
And their faces are haunting me now!
… My brother says to not be so depressed.
He said it’s all my fault.
But he doesn’t realize, I just want out!
‘Coz I hate feeling this distraught.
My sister is blanking me.
My daddy won’t talk to me.
My mummy is on holiday…
I'M ONLY 15
And I just want to escape…
Copyright ©
deathdrop
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2005-07-06 17:01:30]
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Re: Self-destruct.
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 07:27:47 PM AEST
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incredibly sad Im so sorry that your feeling this way great expressions in your write
Michelle |
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Re: Self-destruct.
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by xxbreathlessx on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 08:29:55 PM AEST
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| incredibly sad poem. the emotion really keeps the reader glued ot the page. im sorry this is happening to you, i wnet through depression likee 2 years ago and i know what your feeling. but not giving up is the best reward at the end. maybe try to be more optimistic? i dont know, but i really hope oyu turn to writing instead of somthing else becuase you capture the readers attention well. good job. |
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Re: Self-destruct.
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 08:59:36 PM AEST
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Very raw write. Thank you for your honesty.
I am very sorry your family are not supporting you.
This write was very touching, so keep writing! I would love to see more of your work.
SO take care poet |
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Re: Self-destruct.
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by guiltycircles on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 04:07:45 AM AEST
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| this is full of emotion, the sense of isolation is clearly expressed, well done... your talent is too special to lose and if u listened to your brother then i would be devastated...keep fighting! |
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