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Party of Two
Contributed by
PinkPoet
on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 04:21:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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New shoes
Sparkling like diamonds
Holding my feet like best friends
Shimmering, glimmering, simmering
As I walk this brick path
With abundant flowers applauding me
And the setting sun, like a caregiver, leading the way
To my love...standing erect, luminous and ready
To take me to dinner... reservations at first twinkle
But to first kiss me against a mighty tree
Talking to me in words that run up and down my spine
Divulging my lack of will power
Losing our reservations
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2005-07-06 16:21:40]
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Re: Party of Two
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by trini on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 04:29:07 PM AEST
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hey i really like the write
keep up the good work
-trini |
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Re: Party of Two
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 04:32:13 PM AEST
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I like this poem, but I would really like it more if u extend it a bit. You've got what it takes and I know u have it in u.
Otherwise a pleasant and enjoyable write.
Hugs,
Dreamer |
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Re: Party of Two
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by Dorkfish on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 10:54:23 AM AEST
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| Hey, good job! I like the metaphores. I like how you used random things to describe how love makes you feel. Good write! |
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