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Taroc Card.
Contributed by
fixed
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Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 02:24:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Vertical.
at the trainstation.
People.
Motion.
Desperation.
Devotion?
What am
.train inbetween.
i doing
.stopping inbetween.
here?
stumbling upon the 'Lovers' taroc.
you never called.
Horizontal.
at the trainstation.
Alone.
Forgotten.
All such cliches with your excuses in my ear from my phone in my hand,
which felt like the taroc card of Death.
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fixed
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2005-07-06 14:24:48]
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Re: Taroc Card.
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 03:22:27 PM AEST
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Talk about reading between the lines! Unique write. I think you mean Tarot cards in the last line.
Not sure if you menat lovers tarmac or lovers tarot above.
Good write, just needs some tweaking.
Rita |
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Re: Taroc Card.
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by fixed on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 08:13:36 AM AEST
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| actually rita, a taroc card was the original name for tarot, i know what im talking about so don't patronise me. xxx |
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