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I think my mirrors broken
Contributed by
Flyinglow
on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 02:15:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I think my mirrors broken
because i dont like what i see
i would have changed my ways
if i knew this is what i'd be
My chin is kind of awkward
and my lips are kind of small
and my nose is so tiny
its like its barely there at all
I have a bigger belly
i am not very tall
i am a great person
but the girls never call
I think my mirrors broken
cause i dont like what i see
maybe its not my mirror
whats broken might be me.
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Flyinglow
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2005-07-06 14:15:46]
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Re: I think my mirrors broken
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by heartquake on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 02:36:23 PM AEST
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| great write... the last stanza/line was really powerful... and who needs mirrors anyway right? I swear mine's lieing to me too |
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Re: I think my mirrors broken
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by justme03 on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 02:44:08 PM AEST
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this is an awesome poem. i wrote one kinda like it called "that girl"
and hey...girls should like you for ur personality. looks dont matter. rOcK oN!
luv, ~Kortnie~ |
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Re: I think my mirrors broken
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by xxbreathlessx on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 08:51:05 PM AEST
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| i loved this becuase its something i think eveyrone goes through at one time or another and the way you ended it really made it whole. thanks for sharing. |
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Re: I think my mirrors broken
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by weepingprophet on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 01:22:14 AM AEST
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very strong and deliberate, held fast through the entirety of it. You seem like a person with sarcasm and a sense of humor, we keep ourselves alive sometimes with our own denial. Believing that we are being fooled or decieved by the truth. A mirror is accurate looks do matter unfortunately this world is a world of mirrors and instead of breaking them like we should we bow to them or dodge the relfection thinking that the mirror must be broken. The inevitability of a mirror world is a revolt or a submission. revolt with me flyinglow. f**k the world and all its condemnations!
~promises are shillouettes of pain~weepingpropher |
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