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Glass of Hours
Contributed by
SmokinJoeEvil
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Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 02:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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As sand through glass
My life's lot pass
And time lay waste my vision.
On life's thin lip,
I lose my grip
With every passed decision.
Copyright ©
SmokinJoeEvil
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2003-01-09 02:20:00]
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Re: Glass of Hours
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by OreO on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 09:35:06 AM AEST
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Time is such an important word in life, it has many meanings for me....i think you have written this one very well my friend....sometimes we do get that fear that goes along with making decisions in life that cause much valuable time to be wasted....you made a good strong point there....
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Re: Glass of Hours
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 10:21:31 AM AEST
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Again, I like the brevity and the impact combined.
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Re: Glass of Hours
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by Broken_Skin on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 12:22:27 PM AEST
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| That was cool.. I liked that. |
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