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Walking Through the Cemetery on April Fool's Day
Contributed by
SuperAsh16
on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 02:18:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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all i need are my memories,
to hold me close,
as i cry myself to sleep.
my glass eyes,
float blissfully,
through every moment,
past and present.
clinging to all i can,
my deaf ears,
savor every sound,
as if ive never heard.
my strangled throat,
gasps for the breath,
to finally whisper,
"im sorry".
as i stand in line for execution,
the blade severs so rough,
with my last thought, i realize,
memories arent enough.
Copyright ©
SuperAsh16
... [
2005-07-06 02:18:40]
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Re: Walking Through the Cemetery on April Fool's Day
(User Rating: 1 )
by Maciej on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 09:07:12 PM AEST
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| i really like the realism and flow of this piece |
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Re: Walking Through the Cemetery on April Fool's Day
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by Hoo on
Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 10:33:00 PM AEST
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| real nice piece... has nice flow and isn't drawn out.... the execution part is a little much for me though.... good ending though |
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