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If You Listen to a Silent Movie, You Can Hear the Angels Cry
Contributed by
SuperAsh16
on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 01:54:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
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stranded at the train station,
political whims cause disgust,
numb to emotion and shadow games,
ticket to martyrdom: nonrefundable.
curious interest in all things gruesome,
hitler's nazis and caesar's gimps,
factual and fictional whore-ors,
nonsensical disillusionment.
afraid to be neutral on a moving train,
pick and choose your battles,
always come second to last,
abandoned flame on a one way street.
racing thoughts clear the mind,
the train pulls into the station,
launched from a shaky foundation,
lay across the tracks to free souls.
full steam ahead...
Copyright ©
SuperAsh16
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2005-07-06 01:54:28]
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Re: If You Listen to a Silent Movie, You Can Hear the Angels Cry
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by flamingblade on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 03:33:10 PM AEST
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very nice images
nice title how very true
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Re: If You Listen to a Silent Movie, You Can Hear the Angels Cry
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by em1842 on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 04:45:38 AM AEST
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| I thought this was a really interesting poem, i think it seemed to sho the narrtor's self-confusion, but i liked that it had a conclusion. I didn't understand the title though? |
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Re: If You Listen to a Silent Movie, You Can Hear the Angels Cry
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by ladymaki on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 12:25:23 PM AEST
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I love this poem! It sounds like it could be a song..have you ever heard anything by PANIC! At the disco? THat's what it reminds me of..
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