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Tears Of An Angel...
Contributed by
eternal_dreamer
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Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 12:57:40 AM in AEST
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Deprived from all goodness
Now dwelling amidst hell
This lost beautiful Angel
Once stood so tall and swell
She savoured the hymns
That echoed in her heart
Then came the dreaded day
That she was torn apart
The devil sniggers
His evil work is done
Leaving his scar on this Angel
Her heart turned to stone
Her halo sharded to pieces
As her innocence was shattered
The devil's brewed curse
Left this Angel frail and battered
The Angel's wings broke
They scattered to the floor
Man's evil sexual desires
Bore at her core
The aura that made her glow
Forever fades from her face
As the tears of this Angel
Leave a bloodied trace
For this battered and bruised Angel
She's lost all hope
All her strength gone
She cannot cope
On bended knees she falls everynight
She prays to God to hear her plight
This Angel's tears they forever fall
Since man's desire devoured her all...
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Re: Tears Of An Angel...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 02:22:27 AM AEST
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Wow, this was awesome.
Held me along all the way through, eager to learn what happened to the angel etc.
It flows almost perfectly, and I love the ending, very powerful.
Whenever you need someone to talk to, just know where I am :)
hope n strength n all things between,
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Re: Tears Of An Angel...
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 12:38:40 PM AEST
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And the angel still clings on to her faith.
Hope you are ok
This was excellent
Love Angelxxxx |
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Re: Tears Of An Angel...
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 01:52:36 PM AEST
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Dearest Angel. Keep calling to your creator and he will dry your tears and mend your wings and you will fly again. Beautiful write, Dreamer.
((((hugs))))
Rita |
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by ForeverAlone on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 05:08:15 PM AEST
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Awesome work Dreamer, the entire thing has a very powerful feel and appeal to it, amazing write..oh and i seen one mistake, that i hope you dont mind me pointing out...i think, Bended, should be changed to bent..but just a suggestion, anyways, awesome work again and hope to read from you again soon.
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Re: Tears Of An Angel...
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 05:34:12 PM AEST
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Wow... this is a very good but sad write as well. I am telling you... I was really pulled into this poem. This is also really sad because it is true. Man really do destroy people and things in a countless number of ways. This is one of the most depressing ways. Great poem... it was a flowing write and was written so well...
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Re: Tears Of An Angel...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 07:06:33 AM AEST
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great writing
i like it alot
keep writing i keep reading
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Re: Tears Of An Angel...
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 07:04:27 PM AEST
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Wow. This is a very emotional, and moving write...You did a very good job with this piece, and I'm sure it wasn't the easiest decision on whether to share this with us...I'm glad you did, I can completely relate. I hope you start to heal soon...Feel free to pm me if you ever want to talk...Take Care.
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Re: Tears Of An Angel...
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 08:54:21 PM AEST
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Poor little Angel has already been forgiven by her Loving Heavenly Father who forgives in a great big Way, but she must now forgive herselt!
So Geniune, so true. You are so very talented my dear, and we all love reading your fine work!
And thank you little angel for your sweet comments on my poem also.
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Re: Tears Of An Angel...
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 02:44:36 AM AEST
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What a deep and painfully heartfelt write..
I feel your pain-
It's as if Ive always known you
if only by the way you write..
B |
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Re: Tears Of An Angel...
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 02:58:03 AM AEST
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Hold still, do not move.. close your eyes..
Now where is it.. ok ok..
hang on, hang on..I am getting it.. I will find it..
Ok, you can open your eyes now..
Look deeply at these two lines..
On bended knees she falls everynight
She prays to God to hear her plight
Please keep doing that, over and over.. if you have to stay down on those knees, if you have to ask and ask over and over and over.. until you get the answer..
The LORD always hear us.. He hears us all now.. He answers us right away.. but His time and our time is different.. so sometimes it just takes a little bit longer before you feel your prayer was answered.. and it was.. the moment you asked, it is granted..
But also, even though they are answered, doesnt mean we will like the answer we get..
Wonderful write.. I love it.. very moving.. makes my heart pound.. don't stop writing now.. that would be too much of a waste.. you have a wonderful way of putting those words down on paper so we can hear your heart.
Please don't cry sweetheart. everything will be ok.. trust God..
Remember, I love you and Jesus loves you and don't you forget it..
As I have said many times.. there are no strangers in this world to me, we are all brothers and sisters..
Raquel Leah (Poetress) |
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Re: Tears Of An Angel...
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by Kitty06 on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 11:13:38 PM AEST
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| My interpretation of this is that this 'angel' was raped by the 'devil'. If so, this poem sheds an interesting, yet true light on the subject. A couple of people close to me have been raped and it does seem like 'the aura that made them glow forever fades from their faces.' A beautiful, yet horrifying write. I feel for you if my interpretation was right. |
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 09:51:59 AM AEST
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| This is a very sad poem to me. I wish people were different when they "fall in love" but alas in the majority only one is the giver and the other . . . |
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Re: Tears Of An Angel...
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by SPSM on
Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 07:21:11 AM AEST
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| Everyone on here is so right, your poetry is awesome! I can't wait to read more. |
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Re: Tears Of An Angel...
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 08:11:58 AM AEST
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The sadness in this one broke me. It amazes me that we, as humans, are capable of killing the hearts and souls of our fellow creature. What animals we are.
I pray the Angel finds the hope she searches for.
Take care.
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Re: Tears Of An Angel...
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by tiggytom on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 03:29:12 PM AEST
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A beautiful poem, I felt a certain sense of compassion/empathy as I read, I believe there is a tortured angel hidden in us all, thanks Sue
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by Honesty_strikes_my_pen on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 04:10:44 PM AEST
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| Innocence is somethnig we don't hang on to anymore. Being taken advantage of, sad attraction these days. Very well written and in this case, man is devil. |
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Re: Tears Of An Angel...
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th February 2006 @ 11:37:52 AM AEST
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| Such sad emotion, clever write as always...Mike |
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by Spazzo on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 01:01:30 PM AEST
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This is a really sad and deep poem. I hope things have gotten better for you.
Take care.
Scott |
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