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Breathless
Contributed by
LoveStruck_Hippie
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Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 10:49:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Last night you held me close
Whispered sweetly to my soul
Your touch loving and tender
As soft as the petals of a rose
Each breath in time with mine
Blows gently through my hair
The moment our lips meet
Passions tempest wells within
Realizing a love so deep
As the layers of a Monet
Words spoken soft and true
Baby I love you
For you my love
Shannon
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Re: Breathless
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by bernard on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 09:23:01 AM AEST
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| Great LOVE poem my one suggestion is to change pedals to petals.Keep smiling from bernard |
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Re: Breathless
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 10:32:26 AM AEST
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Sweet. A very heartfelt and touching write...Nice job.
Scorp. |
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Re: Breathless
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by Dorkfish on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 11:09:48 AM AEST
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| Very sweet and romantic. Short, sweet and to the point. I loved that! Great job! |
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Re: Breathless
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 10:07:13 AM AEST
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| This is beautiful. "Layers of a Monet" - I love that! (Especially since I like Monet's work.) I hope things continue to go well for you two, Shannon. Blessings, J. |
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Re: Breathless
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by artjunkiekyle on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 05:25:05 PM AEST
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| Beautiful, I hope your relationship grows into a beautiful blossoming flower! |
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Re: Breathless
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by priss on
Saturday, 17th March 2007 @ 01:44:38 AM AEST
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so sweet...romantic...beautiful...nicely done!
~priss |
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