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You
Contributed by
masked_man
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Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 10:21:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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YOU...IN MY MIND
YOU...I CAN'T FIND
YOU... A MISTAKE
YOU...I CAN'T SHAKE
LOVE...IF I COULD
IF IT WASN'T FOR YOU...
MAYBE I WOULD
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2005-07-05 22:21:48]
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Re: You
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 10:53:15 PM AEST
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interesting write I feel there is something deep behind this
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Re: You
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 11:22:50 PM AEST
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Now that one is something to ponder. Maybe unrequited love. Reality and responsibility do not allow this love. Sad write. Been there, done that, too damn familiar.
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Re: You
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by Dorkfish on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 05:43:13 PM AEST
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| Interesting. Short, but to the point. Good job! |
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