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Jam
Contributed by
jyssvw22
on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 07:36:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The reunion of two gentle souls
Separated by dusk and dawn
Gaining a grasp with the claw
Barricading the touch with a brick wall
Delirium yields combativeness
Effective restrictions on potent motion
Unalike in structure, pattern
And dissimilar in assembly
Collisions of fortuitous ideas
Knowledgeable awareness
Attachment grows to habits
Addicts in turmoil, mystified, static
The reunion of two unique sprits
Drifting apart after a vague appearance
You can have it
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Re: Jam
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 08:00:21 PM AEST
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pretty profound.. the last two stanzas-
you always tell it like it is
and with a flair for words..
an awesome write
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Re: Jam
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 08:23:26 PM AEST
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| Makes the mind have to open to really get what its meaning is good writing once again |
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