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High School
Contributed by
allforyou
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Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 07:02:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
schoolproblems
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High school vandelism,
a profession of love on the bathroom door,
a ventilation of hate scribbled on the desk.
Crisp and pretty folded notes,
a facade for the not so pretty words written inside,
false declarations and break ups and make ups,
on a simple piece of paper.
Smokey bathrooms,
the sauna of the school where ***** off and heartbroken girls,
ease their pain with a cigarette,
the end of the world couldn't be any better.
Copyright ©
allforyou
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2005-07-05 19:02:10]
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Re: High School
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 08:06:21 PM AEST
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Immediately..
the first stanza brings me right back!
Great write..
B |
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Re: High School
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by Tricky on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 06:20:49 PM AEST
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| Kinda sounds like a '80s high school. I like it. Very realistic when it comes to high school. |
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Re: High School
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 8th November 2006 @ 12:40:48 PM AEST
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Highschool sucks i think probably because I am still in it...
Great poem..
Take care
Christina |
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