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spectrum
Contributed by
singhsong
on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 06:48:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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at best
to be touched thoughtfully
watched raptly
as you go about small things
your path lit
by curiosity
your breath caught
and released
and everything you do
a miracle.
at worst
to be loved methodically
watched indifferently
as you go about desperate things
your path obstructed
your breath caught
and held
and everything you do
a habit.
Copyright ©
singhsong
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2005-07-05 18:48:54]
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Re: spectrum
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by CodyJ on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 07:42:33 PM AEST
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| neat. kudos |
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Re: spectrum
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 07:43:58 PM AEST
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enjoyed this nice stye like how you mixed words very good
Michelle |
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Re: spectrum
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 05:09:53 AM AEST
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Bipolar.
Two extremes -the outline of a relationship's (or love's) spectrum.
Eloquently expressed, reinforcing a message ever so valid.
I can very much relate...and could not have worded this more accurately.
Thanks for sharing :) |
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