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lies that dont care
Contributed by
hardrocker15198916
on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 04:31:23 PM in AEST
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anguished
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infected with fate drowning my mind
evil so blind to impurities to find
dieing in desperation; seaching for more
failing to realize this life; what for?
caving experiences that lingered so long
never understanding the fact you were wrong
dont grasp the fact that you werent there
i cant understand why you dont care
if your didnt care why do you say so
cause learning the lies; its hard to know
i wont let you forget the things you have said
ill always remember in my heart and my head
dont tell me the lies you say that are true
i hate the fact i ever wanted to know you
you hurt me in ways that i imagined not
luckily for me youre not all that ive got
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Re: lies that dont care
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 04:45:55 PM AEST
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| i like how you ended this. at first i thought it was going to end sad, about losing everything...but you had a twist and i love the strength shown here. great job. |
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Re: lies that dont care
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by slowlysinking on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 04:07:36 PM AEST
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| great ending! |
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