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The Enchanted Passage
Contributed by
gwenevere
on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 04:29:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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She found the door, hidden so well
And on the lock, there hung a spell
She spoke the words and was made small
To enter, she could not be tall
The golden key fit in it's place
The door opened with ease and grace
And as the lady stepped inside
she found the passage, long and wide
The door then closed with a loud thump
So loud it really made her jump
Now, how was she supposed to see
Down that long passage, in the tree
Then all at once from out the gloom
She heard a sound,a zing, a zoom
A million starlights showed the way
They were just fireflies, out to play
She clapped her hands with sheer delight
At that most amazing sight
But of course she didn't know
What was waiting, far below
Copyright ©
gwenevere
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2005-07-05 16:29:20]
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Re: The Enchanted Passage
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 05:51:36 PM AEST
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the plot thickens...can't wait for more.
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Re: The Enchanted Passage
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by StoneAngel on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 07:36:41 PM AEST
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| very good write u should read some of my stuff. |
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Re: The Enchanted Passage
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 08:35:26 PM AEST
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Hmm seems like I missed something here... Interesting write...has me wanting moreeeeeeeee...
(I'll have to go look at parts 1 & 2)
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Re: The Enchanted Passage
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 09:51:21 PM AEST
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This, for me, is the best installment so far-
can't wait for 4-
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Re: The Enchanted Passage
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 06:28:20 PM AEST
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These are great every time I read them. Too bad I am reading them backwards. Even with that I am so into them. These are great...
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Re: The Enchanted Passage
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by mom11159 on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 10:01:06 PM AEST
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wow you sure know how to write them waiting in antisipation for part 4 loved it so very much like watch in good movie keep them coming and I will keep reading
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