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A Mordant Elegy
Contributed by
springchic1979
on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 04:21:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
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You implement your compliment
With intent to patronize.
Do you believe I can’t perceive
Or would not recognize?
Your ‘battery of flattery’
Leaves much to be desired.
You lack the skill and wit, yet still
You relish what’s transpired.
You want to play? Let’s repartee-
Let’s have a little fun.
My cleverness and adroitness
Shall finish what’s begun.
I’m a chasm of sarcasm
With wry witticism
As soon you’ll find; I don’t take kind
To snide criticism.
On occasion, as dissuasion,
I’ll painstakingly provide
Spectacular vernacular
Appropriately applied.
I’ll cut you short with each retort
I have no empathy
And when I’m through I’ll pen for you
A mordant elegy.
Yvonne Denise Springer
Copyright ©2005 Yvonne Denise Springer
Copyright ©
springchic1979
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2005-07-05 16:21:00]
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Re: A Mordant Elegy
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 04:48:33 PM AEST
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| again, another amazing write from you. Definitely deserves higher than a 5.... |
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Re: A Mordant Elegy
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 05:56:14 PM AEST
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I must say this is an excellent poem
so much said in so few words.
I'm so glad you commented on my poem cause if you didn't I might have never got the chance to read such "Great Poems" |
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Re: A Mordant Elegy
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by singhsong on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 06:52:15 PM AEST
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| bravo! i loved it... it made me smile wickedly...rant on. |
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Re: A Mordant Elegy
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by TheSchroedmeister on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 08:09:46 PM AEST
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Hats off to the poem with a rapier wit and sarcasm to boot.
A different taste for the evening, and one I like |
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Re: A Mordant Elegy
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 01:34:06 PM AEST
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yvonne, this is excellent! i love the passion with which you wrote this in and as always your poetry comes across beautiful, strong and brilliant! its so nice to see you home again!! you have been missed!! big hugs n' love nessa
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