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The Golden Key
Contributed by
gwenevere
on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 04:19:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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She sits and waits so patiently
Then falls asleep beneath the tree
She dreams of journey to partake
And then she jumps up wide awake
The air is dark, the air is still
Radiant moonbeams, light does spill
on the ground, awaiting there
With the lady, oh, so fair
In the beam, what does she see?
A glittering jewel, a golden key
What is this, is this for me?
Why does it shine so brilliantly?
She gently kneels upon the ground
And looks at this small thing she's found
where is the lock, where does it hide?
The place where golden key will slide
The quiet voice sings out once more
Just look and you will see the door
Hurry then and you will see
Enchanted passage in the tree
Copyright ©
gwenevere
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2005-07-05 16:19:52]
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Re: The Golden Key
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 04:43:18 PM AEST
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| enchanting poetry. its like a sweet dream of engaging mystery. great job. |
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Re: The Golden Key
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 05:49:49 PM AEST
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my hat's off to you, gwen. this is really excellent.
sounds very magical, and so easy to visualize.
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Re: The Golden Key
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 09:45:07 PM AEST
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What an amazing mysterious story thus far Ros..
Off to three-
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Re: The Golden Key
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 06:31:10 PM AEST
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Cool... this whole thing is surprising to me eventhough I already know the ending. Seriously... this is a great write and full of excitement. You have such a great gift of rhyming "intelligently". I have never seen better rhymes...
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Re: The Golden Key
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by mom11159 on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 09:58:47 PM AEST
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OMG I am so loving this have to read part 3 Your rhyming as well as your flow is perfect your imagery is perfect I love the mystery you are persenting such enchantment in this so now I go to read the 3rd part I love it
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