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Unique
Contributed by
springchic1979
on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 04:16:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
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Some would define these ‘rhymes’ of mine
As 'cleverly composed'-
Though 'fatiguing', quite 'intriguing'
For 'pleonastic prose'.
Some would swear I’m 'not all there'
My writings are 'nonsense'-
'Dreary, obscure, and insecure...
Lacking all coherence'.
Some would complain I’m 'way too vain'
My stanzas are 'too neat'-
That I 'regress'; choose to 'obsess
On every single beat'.
Some would depict me as 'cryptic'
Each verse a 'mystery'-
'Riddles enclosed in words exposed
Hidden for all to see'.
'Constant conceit in measured feet',
'Haughty verbosity',
'Enigmatic', 'problematic',
'Structured redundancy'.
Those people use personal views
To criticize my art-
Biased onslaughts upon my thoughts;
Opinions worlds apart.
Don’t analyze and scrutinize
It’s unique poetry-
Ornate designed by frame of mind…
Complex simplicity.
Yvonne Denise Springer
Copyright ©2005 Yvonne Denise Springer
Copyright ©
springchic1979
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2005-07-05 16:16:15]
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Re: Unique
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 04:40:17 PM AEST
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| i relate to this too damn well and you did a wonderful job on calling those people out. i Love,love,love your style of writing and your vocabulary. wonderful job. |
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Re: Unique
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 05:06:17 PM AEST
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Excuse the term, but that was a kick a** poem! It rocked. All right, enough corniness... loved the beat and so true.
*Naomi* |
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Re: Unique
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 06:08:30 PM AEST
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This is expessed in prefect words.
I love the dbl. rhyming very inteligent
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Re: Unique
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 02:15:31 PM AEST
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i love this poem yvonne, and its so you all over lol, sheesh girl ive really missed your poetry so much, excellent as always:)
big hugs n' love nessa
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