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Broken Dreams & Lies
Contributed by
living_dead_girl
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Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 03:47:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Pull me up & out
Look into my eyes
Tell me what this is all about
All the broken dreams & lies
Why weren't you here?
What was more important than all this?
You never saw my tears
When it was you I missed
Do you even remember how I look?
Or have you forgotten it all?
Everytime you left, my smile you took
Again, to the ground I fall
Why can't you show you care?
Instead of always leaving
Just once can't you be there?
When I stop believeing
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living_dead_girl
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2005-07-05 15:47:56]
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Re: Broken Dreams & Lies
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 03:49:30 PM AEST
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| alot of emotion and pain here. sorry about your dad but good job on the poem. |
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Re: Broken Dreams & Lies
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 04:01:13 PM AEST
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I feel you 100% and feel for you all at once
We cant change others thoughts just be happy you know your father as for me i dont know mine. Very good job of expessing yourself and writing too
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Re: Broken Dreams & Lies
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by deusdeira on
Saturday, 18th December 2010 @ 09:32:47 PM AEST
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| how sad, i feel your pain in this poem |
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