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i'm not sorry
Contributed by
seci
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Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 02:57:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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you told me a thousand times that you loved me
only five of them i felt was honestly true
you held me a million times
but only ten of those hugs i only felt you were mine
you kissed me on so many nights
only one of those kisses belonged to me when we first met and the rest belonged to someone else who you felt at the time was right
i loved you over and over again in the dim smooth light
but when i looked into your eyes i pictured another woman loving you
i was no where in your sight
i looked into your eyes so many times and everytime i looked in them, i only saw a sick person living in his own damn lies
i played the role of your mother so long
now all i see is a young boy who needs to go home until he is a real man to love me and to love me strong
i called you every day to speak and to tell you what was on my mind
you never listened, only played and watched the football game because you felt like i was wasting your time
i said i was sorry a billion, trillion times when the lights were turned dim
but alittle gift from me to you
i never meant neither one of them
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Re: i'm not sorry
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 04:51:01 PM AEST
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| damn. you go girl! lol, but seriously this was really good, i admire the power and strength that you founf through your weaknesses. great job. |
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Re: i'm not sorry
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 04:02:16 PM AEST
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Fantastic. Great concept, and creatively emotional...Love that sting at the end; )
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