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forever
Contributed by
crushed_velvet_roses
on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 02:53:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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i hear the rain pounding
down upon my head
i hear my heart calling
for something once was dead
i feel the cool drops falling
right into my eyes
i feel your arms around me
just like all the old times
your life your breath in me
your happiness i consume
all the things you gave me
i keep locked in my room
for i will always love you
never left to dispare
my feelings remain forever true
any time, anywhere
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crushed_velvet_roses
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2005-07-05 14:53:11]
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Re: forever
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 01:36:40 PM AEST
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this is so sweet! it's amazing...i love it. i love the emotion and feeling and everything you put in here
great write
- Beth - |
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Re: forever
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by deepviolet on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 03:02:44 AM AEST
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| good expression of loss of love. it's just a bit- too easy. i don't know. i'm going out of my mind i think :P. and also, 'dispare' is spelled 'despair', just noticed while i was reading. |
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