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Mind game
Contributed by
seci
on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 02:30:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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if you don't love me then just let me be
i don't want to suffer no longer in this misery
leaving me in the house thinking that you really loved me
but i realize i'm no good for you
i'm just like any other woman in your eyes
i don't like being in a relationship where i am always confused
i don't like being in a love where i'm emotionally, physically and mentally abused
lord knows i will climb the highest mountain for you
but i now know you want do it for me
if i was in a dark tunnel alone, you wouldn't even help me pull though
i hate to honestly say it, but my mother was right
i couldn't stand the feeling of hearing her out , i felt as our love needed
to have a fight
others who knew of your secret life behind closed doors laughed in my face
i can't believe i wanted to marry you. have kids and have our own place
i known you all of my life and i felt for a reason or another that the timing for us two was right
i was used to lie in your bed and lose what i had own
i feel stupid because others warned me, but i wanted to be lefted alone
how can i call you my baby when really someone else was your lady
i worked hard for you
i stood by your side when others including your family wouldn't help you pull though
i don't think no one could have loved you the way i did but i felt like you couldn't give me time
now look, i realize you were never mine
i cried so damn much for you
still crying , still crying, still crying
it feels as if i'm dying
your pain was my pain
i stood here with a umbrella to say i loved you in the deep pouring rain
was i not so good enough for you
didn't i love you
i held you, touched you, kissed you, caressed you with all of my heart and like a glass with no care you watch me with your dead eyes me shatter apart
i wanted you here
i didn't want to love in fear
i loved you
i was loving you, i made love to you, now our love without a trace is though
i know if i was to love you again it wouldn't be the same
i hate myself deeply when i was being warned,but i was another girl lost in your love mind game
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seci
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2005-07-05 14:30:59]
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Re: Mind game
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 04:13:30 PM AEST
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Your pain and anguish is fully felt, and wonderfully expressed in this write...I'm so glad you dumped this loser...You are such a kind, loving young lady, and you deserve better...MUCH better...Good stuff seci...I like this one.
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Re: Mind game
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by harlot20 on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 06:30:33 PM AEST
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| even though in this poem you come to terms that his love was a mind game, some where in the underlying context it still comes across as you still somewhere deep inside you still love him. because he's somehow made you feel like you MUST and SHOULD love him even though he was really mean and evil. |
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