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The Little Pieces
Contributed by
TheTimeOf
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Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 01:18:49 PM in AEST
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Wine stained dreams and elegant flow of sorrow
Words that no longer capture the true grace of the character
Yes it’s all seemingly for sale in the hall closet
That is in need of cleaning
But I have time flying by on auto pilot
And a handful of sand to shove in my mouth
So don’t dwell to long on the inner secrets
Dust and tarnish some things must hide
Quiet time and a few small sips of cold coffee
And its time to go again
Even as the long breath is drawn
With the soul felt hope that you are going to
Live
With the stars still firmly set in the sky
We have dreams enough for now
And so it goes these endless tangled thoughts
That I have never once spoken so clearly
Outside of my mind
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2005-07-05 13:18:49]
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Re: The Little Pieces
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by detourchick on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 02:35:03 PM AEST
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ok i liked it alot and i commented on somoene elses about this wierd text thing going on but i guess its just the site i liked it alot : )
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Re: The Little Pieces
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th February 2006 @ 12:50:05 PM AEST
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very cool, i liked it...shame that it was in the "least read poems" section. not sure what EXACTLEY it is that i like...but it's definitely well-written
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Re: The Little Pieces
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by candysears on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 07:08:12 PM AEST
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| Nice write...God Bless! |
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Re: The Little Pieces
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by TheTimeOf on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 09:43:57 AM AEST
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| Thanks for reading, and leaving your thoughts! |
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