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Adrift
Contributed by
JustJay
on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 12:19:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Drift all your life, from ocean to ocean
For a girl, like none you’ve known
You found a love that was never there
And like none you’ll ever own
Her words sang you to shipwreck
Her heart was made of stone
So write your poems of grief and despair
They’ll make you more alone
Copyright ©
JustJay
... [
2005-07-05 12:19:26] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Adrift
(User Rating: 1 ) by detourchick on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 02:30:50 PM AEST (User
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your poem is good but theres that wierd uh text and it ruined it for me becasue it called my attention away from it |
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