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Let me show you

Contributed by Whoknows on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 11:14:29 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



I started going to a Youth group and this is what came from it..

Tell me what you think I need to know if I should do anything with it or not..



You may not think that what your doing,
Is helping anyone but they all know diffrently,

You sure gave up faster then they thought,
Learn that teens arent open with feelings,

You said a few times you were glad to be there,
They once found it true and were glad to have heard it,

What did you do to make them all think,
That you dont like them and want to leave,

You have helped them all so much,
have you really not noticed at all,

I can tell by how they talk about you,
and how they changed since you were there,

Someone once told me:
"You can tell from the first time you meet him that he's there for you and you can tell him anything and he will listen and help you, Hes been through alot of stuff we have which makes it easier to talk to him"

Now that same person says:
"I dont know why heres here if he doesnt want to be, He now has videos to make it easier and he doesnt talk to us at all, I miss when we would just talk about everyday things and not some video"

You may not think your changing,
But talk to the someone and find out,

They all miss the 4 hour Thursdays,
Along with the water fights and pranks,

Now that you know they want you there,
What are you gonna do to fix it,
What are you gonna do to help these teens?




Copyright © Whoknows ... [ 2005-07-05 11:14:29]
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Re: Let me show you (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 11:24:13 AM AEST
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very good your laid it all on the line with this one
Michelle


Re: Let me show you (User Rating: 1 )
by trini on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 05:19:27 PM AEST
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hey good work, very true indeed.
-trini




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