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Like cutting my wrists
Contributed by
xoxpaperxheartxox
on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 10:58:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Loving her is like cutting my wrists
Gets deeper and deeper until i stop because i cannot feel
Cannot live with the pain that has subsided into the deepest most hurtful regions of my broken heart
Dealing with going to work and seeing her smiling face cuts deeper and deeper
Knowing shes happy with HIM i thought he was my friend was he or was he trying to get close to her
So as i sit by watching her every movement and as she looks at me with that look that i have waitd to see for so long
I feel like death in itself is not good enough for the pain she has caused
I suffer while she sits by laughing it all away
I get hurt she finds happiness
The world is a ***** up place and not right
Slowly seeming like death is the best answer
Wondering why i havent done it yet
Seeing her the way she moves walks talks and missing every bit of it
As i sit by watching she knows, She knows she has me round her finger ready to jump when she tells me to
She knows i sit here and watch her and she makes me think i have hope but do i
NO
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Re: Like cutting my wrists
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by trini on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 11:14:45 AM AEST
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good poem, very deep. i give it a 4.
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Re: Like cutting my wrists
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by sprinter27 on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 11:51:55 AM AEST
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good write. i liked it. and i think you have to get away from this person. you shouldn't stay with her, where you have the thoughts of suicide. i'm sorry you have to put up with this pain and i wish you the best of luck!!
~sprints
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Re: Like cutting my wrists
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by ducki on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 06:16:41 PM AEST
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| This is very deppresing, well done!! |
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Re: Like cutting my wrists
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by xXcrossedXx on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 12:45:11 PM AEST
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Hey shawn this was a great write again... I haven't talked to you in so long and I'm sorry all this sh*t is still happening, ill be here to talk whenever you want.
great write,
xoxo
.amanda. |
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