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Monster
Contributed by
bgj
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Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 09:04:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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From the mist of the twisted wood
The dreaded one watches and waits,
His glaring red eyes and his cold dark heart
Are filled with hunger and hate.
With patience of stone he bids his time
As he waits for the world to wake,
Someone will stray from the road
And their life will be his to take.
Travelers who pass do not know
The horror that lurks within,
That if they enter into the wood
Their body and soul he’ll rend.
Brave men have entered into his realm
To try to end his reign,
But when they encounter the evil one
They die in horror and pain.
Since time eternal he’s stalked the wood
This vile destroyer of souls,
He’s the hated enemy of all that’s good
As told in the legends of old.
Bobby G. Jarrard
Copyright 2005 by Bobby G. Jarrard
Copyright ©
bgj
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2005-07-05 09:04:20]
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Re: Monster
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 02:41:03 PM AEST
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I must say, I dislike Dark Poetry, but this was acceptable to me because it could be reality! Well written poem, great form. I don't know who taught you how to write true poetry, but they were very good, and if you just learned on your own, then keep up the good work.
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Re: Monster
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 06:06:28 PM AEST
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very good...i thoroughly enjoyed this story..great flow and rhyming..beautiful in its darkness.
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Re: Monster
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by Rsdemon89 on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 01:03:59 AM AEST
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Very interesting... I would very much like for you to tell me where you got the inspiration and idea for this poem from, beacause i am curious... as i say, interesting..and extremly good, and i'll tell you why, because it set a picture in my mind, as soon as i started reading the poem. :-)
Great work and tell me where you got the inspiration from please. *thanks*
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