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Cemetery Angel
Contributed by
SirensLight
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Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 08:30:19 AM in AEST
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I sit alone on this dark night
I watch the half moon make shadows with its light
I feel the rain heavy in the air
I wait for it, silent, without care
I feel the first drop as it tumbles down my cheek
and I wait for the others to start to streak
My warmth cools as they fall down,
though most of them hit ground
I stand there a solitary figure out in the rain
all alone, and no one sees my pain
When tomorrow comes and people see me again,
no one will notice my strain
Because I am nothing to them
Just another weathered statue
Watching, waiting
With unchanging face
Praying, protecting
Solitary in my grace
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SirensLight
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2005-07-05 08:30:19]
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Re: Cemetery Angel
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by bgj on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 09:07:40 AM AEST
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Not bad. Keep writing.
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Re: Cemetery Angel
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by boobiepeach on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 10:31:25 AM AEST
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good write.
well exicuted.
i really liked th second to last stanza.
no one ever notices anyones strian.
peach
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Re: Cemetery Angel
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by Dorkfish on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 11:29:07 AM AEST
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| That was very good. I really felt your emotions. I've felt like that before, I'm sure most of us have. Great job capturing the moment and how you felt. I'm sorry you feel like that. |
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